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Language Techniques for Effect

Writers choose words and techniques deliberately. In the exam, name the technique, quote it, and explain the effect – not just ‘it makes the reader interested’.

Common techniques

• **Simile** – comparison using like/as • **Metaphor** – says something *is* something else • **Personification** – non-human given human qualities • **Alliteration** – repeated starting sounds • **Emotive language** – words that stir feeling • **Repetition** – emphasis through repeating words/ideas • **Rhetorical question** – question not expecting an answer

Explaining effect

Weak: “The metaphor is effective.” Strong: “The metaphor ‘a wall of silence’ suggests the argument is **impassable and cold**, so the reader feels the relationship has shut down.” Link technique → meaning → reader’s response.

Worked example

Effect of ‘the wind howled’?

Solution: **Personification** – the wind is given a human/animal cry. Suggests threat or loneliness; the reader may feel unease or isolation.

Practice questions

1. Simile vs metaphor?

2. What should an effect comment include?